Hinweis: Der folgende Beitrag bezieht sich auf die Sprachmittlungs-Aufgabe der länderübergreifenden „Übungsklausur“ vom 5.11.13.
Ein „Artikel“ braucht natürlich eine interessante Überschrift. Meine Schüler haben sich folgende Überschriften ausgedacht:
Born to Be Mayor / Not Just a Man in Black / The First of His Kind / Yes We Cän / Yes Wir Können / Yes Er Kann’s / Obama Junior / Call Me Maybe Obama / Germany’s Next Obama? / Obamehret
Auf der Website sollen junge Leute „Interessantes“ über Deutschland erfahren. Also erwarte ich eine kurze Einleitung, die das Interesse des Lesers wecken soll. Gut gefallen mir die folgenden Einleitungen:
His name is Ehret, John Ehret. And he is black. And he is probably Germany’s first black mayor in a small town in south-west Germany. And he has a really unusual biography.
Yes, it’s true – Germany still has problems with right-wing extremists who hate all foreigners and people with dark skin. But at the same time John Ehret has been elected Germany’s first black mayor in a small town in rural, south-west Germany. Here’s his story.
No political experience. No party member. No expensive campaign. 40 years old. 58,1 % of the votes. Germany’s first black mayor in a small town in a rural region in south-west Germany. That’s the story of John Ehret.
Der Text sollte nicht einfach abrupt enden, hier schöne ‚final paragraphs‘ (vgl. „Schlussfolgerung/Schlusssatz“):
Now he has the opportunity to give something back to the people who helped him have a good life – yes he can!
The example of John Ehret shows convincingly how an open, friendly and modest appearance can help you to succeed in life. It will hopefully encourage more young people with a different ethnic background to get involved in their community and local politics.
Now the question is, whether Ehret can fulfil his promises. In other words: „Can“ he?
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