{"id":7008,"date":"2011-03-19T17:49:13","date_gmt":"2011-03-19T16:49:13","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.jochenenglish.de\/?p=7008"},"modified":"2011-03-19T18:26:26","modified_gmt":"2011-03-19T17:26:26","slug":"composition-common-mistakes","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/?p=7008","title":{"rendered":"Composition \u2013 Common Mistakes"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><small>Wenn du den fol\u00adgen\u00adden Text f\u00fcr dei\u00adne Sch\u00fc\u00adler anpas\u00adsen m\u00f6ch\u00adtest, kannst du dir die Datei (doc) <a href=\"https:\/\/www.jochenlueders.de\/abitur\/composition_common_mistakes.doc\">hier her\u00adun\u00adter\u00adla\u00adden<\/a>.<\/small><\/p>\n<p>Topic: <strong>The Inter\u00adnet \u2013 A Dan\u00adge\u00adrous Addiction?<\/strong><\/p>\n<div id=\"ez-toc-container\" class=\"ez-toc-v2_0_88 counter-hierarchy ez-toc-counter ez-toc-grey ez-toc-container-direction\">\n<div class=\"ez-toc-title-container\">\n<p class=\"ez-toc-title\" style=\"cursor:inherit\">Inhalt<\/p>\n<span class=\"ez-toc-title-toggle\"><\/span><\/div>\n<nav><ul class=\"ez-toc-list ez-toc-list-level-1 \"><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-4\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-1\" href=\"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/?p=7008\/#Title_doesnt_refer_to_fit_main_part\">Title doesn\u2019t refer to \/ fit main&nbsp;part.<\/a><\/li><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-4\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-2\" href=\"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/?p=7008\/#Introduction_doesnt_introduce_the_topic\">Intro\u00adduc\u00adtion doesn\u2019t intro\u00addu\u00adce the&nbsp;topic.<\/a><\/li><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-4\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-3\" href=\"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/?p=7008\/#Introduction_only_announces_what_the_writer_is_going_to_do\">Intro\u00adduc\u00adtion only announ\u00adces what the wri\u00adter is going to&nbsp;do.<\/a><\/li><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-4\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-4\" href=\"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/?p=7008\/#Introduction_introduces_different_topic\">Intro\u00adduc\u00adtion intro\u00addu\u00adces dif\u00adfe\u00adrent&nbsp;topic.<\/a><\/li><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-4\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-5\" href=\"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/?p=7008\/#Main_part_No_topic_sentence\">Main part: No topic sentence.<\/a><\/li><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-4\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-6\" href=\"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/?p=7008\/#Main_part_Topic_sentence_doesnt_fit_the_following_examples\">Main part: Topic sen\u00adtence doesn\u2019t fit the fol\u00adlo\u00adwing examples.<\/a><\/li><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-4\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-7\" href=\"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/?p=7008\/#Main_part_More_than_one_aspect_topic_per_paragraph\">Main part: More than one aspect \/ topic per paragraph.<\/a><\/li><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-4\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-8\" href=\"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/?p=7008\/#Conclusion_doesnt_fit_introduction_andor_main_part\">Con\u00adclu\u00adsi\u00adon doesn\u2019t fit intro\u00adduc\u00adtion and\/or main&nbsp;part.<\/a><\/li><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-4\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-9\" href=\"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/?p=7008\/#Conclusion_is_a_pure_repetition_of_main_part\">Con\u00adclu\u00adsi\u00adon is a pure repe\u00adti\u00adti\u00adon of main&nbsp;part.<\/a><\/li><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-4\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-10\" href=\"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/?p=7008\/#Conclusion_presents_new_argument\">Con\u00adclu\u00adsi\u00adon pres\u00adents new argument.<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/nav><\/div>\n<h4><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Title_doesnt_refer_to_fit_main_part\"><\/span>Title doesn\u2019t refer to \/ fit main&nbsp;part.<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h4>\n<p>Title: Stair\u00adway to Addic\u00adtion&nbsp;(cf. Led Zep\u00adpe\u00adlin: Stair\u00adway to Heaven)<\/p>\n<p>Main part claims that Inter\u00adnet is NOT addictive.<!--more--><\/p>\n<h4><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Introduction_doesnt_introduce_the_topic\"><\/span>Introduction doesn\u2019t introduce the&nbsp;topic.<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h4>\n<p>Recent\u00adly a young man died after he had play\u00aded an online game for seve\u00adral days wit\u00adhout almost any inter\u00adrup\u00adti\u00adon. This cau\u00adsed a con\u00adtro\u00adver\u00adsi\u00adal debate.<\/p>\n<h4><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Introduction_only_announces_what_the_writer_is_going_to_do\"><\/span>Introduction only announces what the writer is going to&nbsp;do.<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h4>\n<p>In the fol\u00adlo\u00adwing I\u2019m going to dis\u00adcuss whe\u00adther the Inter\u00adnet can lead to dan\u00adge\u00adrous addiction.<\/p>\n<h4><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Introduction_introduces_different_topic\"><\/span>Introduction introduces different &nbsp;topic.<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h4>\n<p>Recent\u00adly a young man died after he had play\u00aded an online game for seve\u00adral days wit\u00adhout almost any inter\u00adrup\u00adti\u00adon. This cau\u00adsed a con\u00adtro\u00adver\u00adsi\u00adal deba\u00adte about the ques\u00adti\u00adon whe\u00adther cer\u00adtain online games should be prohibited.<\/p>\n<h4><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Main_part_No_topic_sentence\"><\/span>Main part: No topic sentence.<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h4>\n<p><strong>Wrong: <\/strong>First of all on sites like PokerStars.com you can lose a lot of&nbsp;money.<\/p>\n<p>First of all online games can be high\u00adly addic\u00adti\u00adve. On sites like PokerStars.com you can lose a lot of money, becau\u00adse you easi\u00adly lose track of how much money you\u2019ve alre\u00ada\u00addy&nbsp;lost.&nbsp;[\u2026]<\/p>\n<h4><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Main_part_Topic_sentence_doesnt_fit_the_following_examples\"><\/span>Main part: Topic sentence doesn\u2019t fit the following examples.<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h4>\n<p>First of all online games can be high\u00adly addic\u00adti\u00adve. Some peo\u00adp\u00adle for exam\u00adp\u00adle feel a strong pres\u00adsu\u00adre to check their email all the&nbsp;time.&nbsp;[\u2026]<\/p>\n<h4><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Main_part_More_than_one_aspect_topic_per_paragraph\"><\/span>Main part: More than one aspect \/ topic per paragraph.<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h4>\n<p>First of all online games can be high\u00adly addic\u00adti\u00adve. On sites like PokerStars.com you can lose a lot of money, becau\u00adse you easi\u00adly lose track of how much money you\u2019ve alre\u00ada\u00addy lost. Also chat rooms can be very addic\u00adti\u00adve, because&nbsp;\u2026<\/p>\n<h4><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Conclusion_doesnt_fit_introduction_andor_main_part\"><\/span>Conclusion doesn\u2019t fit introduction and\/or main&nbsp;part.<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h4>\n<p>Main part: There\u2019s a serious dan\u00adger of addiction<\/p>\n<p>Con\u00adclu\u00adsi\u00adon: All in all you can say that the dan\u00adgers of addic\u00adtion are great\u00adly exaggerated.<\/p>\n<h4><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Conclusion_is_a_pure_repetition_of_main_part\"><\/span>Conclusion is a pure repetition of main&nbsp;part.<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h4>\n<p>Final\u00adly online games can be high\u00adly addictive.&nbsp;[\u2026]<\/p>\n<p>All in all you can say that online games can be high\u00adly addictive.<\/p>\n<h4><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Conclusion_presents_new_argument\"><\/span>Conclusion presents new argument.<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h4>\n<p>All in all I think that the dan\u00adgers of addic\u00adtion are great\u00adly exag\u00adge\u00adra\u00adted. For exam\u00adp\u00adle online games in gene\u00adral don\u2019t make peo\u00adp\u00adle addicted.&nbsp;[\u2026]<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Wenn du den fol\u00adgen\u00adden Text f\u00fcr dei\u00adne Sch\u00fc\u00adler anpas\u00adsen m\u00f6ch\u00adtest, kannst du dir die Datei (doc) hier her\u00adun\u00adter\u00adla\u00adden. Topic: The Inter\u00adnet \u2013 A Dan\u00adge\u00adrous Addic\u00adtion? Title doesn\u2019t refer to \/ fit main&nbsp;part. Title: Stair\u00adway to Addic\u00adtion&nbsp;(cf. Led Zep\u00adpe\u00adlin: Stair\u00adway to Hea\u00adven) Main part claims that Inter\u00adnet is NOT addictive.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":25,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"wp_typography_post_enhancements_disabled":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[8],"tags":[71],"class_list":["post-7008","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-alg","tag-composition"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/7008","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/25"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=7008"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/7008\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":7016,"href":"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/7008\/revisions\/7016"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=7008"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=7008"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=7008"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}