{"id":1245,"date":"2008-03-07T16:56:48","date_gmt":"2008-03-07T15:56:48","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.jochenenglish.de\/?p=1245"},"modified":"2014-11-20T19:45:26","modified_gmt":"2014-11-20T18:45:26","slug":"literaturwettbewerbe","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/?p=1245","title":{"rendered":"Literaturwettbewerbe"},"content":{"rendered":"

\u2026 sind eine beson\u00adde\u00adre Form von Com\u00adpe\u00adti\u00adti\u00adons<\/a>, die oft den Abschluss einer crea\u00adti\u00adve wri\u00adting<\/em> Auf\u00adga\u00adbe bilden.<\/p>\n

Das ein\u00adfachs\u00adte Ver\u00adfah\u00adren f\u00fcr einen Lite\u00adra\u00adtur\u00adwett\u00adbe\u00adwerb (das aller\u00addings nur in klei\u00adne\u00adren Klas\u00adsen bzw. Kur\u00adsen ver\u00adn\u00fcnf\u00adtig funk\u00adtio\u00adniert) geht so: Alle Sch\u00fc\u00adler set\u00adzen sich in einen Kreis und geben ihre Arbeit im Uhr\u00adzei\u00adger\u00adsinn an den n\u00e4chs\u00adten Nach\u00adbarn wei\u00adter. Auf die\u00adse Art zir\u00adku\u00adlie\u00adren alle Tex\u00adte solan\u00adge, bis jeder jeden gele\u00adsen hat. Die Sch\u00fc\u00adler sol\u00adlen sich w\u00e4h\u00adrend der Lek\u00adt\u00fc\u00adre Noti\u00adzen machen, wenn ihnen etwas beson\u00adders auf\u00adf\u00e4llt (wit\u00adzi\u00adger Titel, gelun\u00adge\u00adne Ein\u00adlei\u00adtung, span\u00adnen\u00adde Hand\u00adlung etc.). Am Ende der Bespre\u00adchung kann man dann (in gehei\u00admer Wahl) den bes\u00adten Text w\u00e4h\u00adlen lassen.<\/p>\n

Etwas auf\u00adw\u00e4n\u00addi\u00adger f\u00fcr den Leh\u00adrer ist das fol\u00adgen\u00adde Ver\u00adfah\u00adren: Alle Sch\u00fc\u00adler schi\u00adcken mir ihre Geschich\u00adte als Datei. Aus allen Sch\u00fc\u00adler\u00adar\u00adbei\u00adten w\u00e4h\u00adle ich die bes\u00adten f\u00fcnf aus und kor\u00adri\u00adgie\u00adre, falls n\u00f6tig, die gr\u00f6bs\u00adten Feh\u00adler. Anschlie\u00ad\u00dfend kopie\u00adre ich die Tex\u00adte (ohne Ver\u00adfas\u00adser\u00adna\u00admen) in eine neue Datei und kon\u00adver\u00adtie\u00adre sie zu einem PDF Doku\u00adment. Die\u00adse PDF Datei bekom\u00admen alle Sch\u00fc\u00adler wie\u00adder per Mail. Falls ich Zeit habe, kor\u00adri\u00adgie\u00adre ich noch die rest\u00adli\u00adchen Tex\u00adte, falls nicht, dann halt nicht.<\/p>\n

Jeder Sch\u00fc\u00adler muss nun sei\u00adne per\u00ads\u00f6n\u00adli\u00adche \u201eHit\u00adpa\u00adra\u00adde\u201c erstel\u00adlen. Der sei\u00adner Mei\u00adnung nach bes\u00adte Text bekommt 5 Punk\u00adte, der zweit\u00adbes\u00adte 4 Punk\u00adte usw. Die Iden\u00adti\u00adfi\u00adzie\u00adrung der Tex\u00adte geschieht \u00fcber die \u00dcber\u00adschrift. Von jedem Sch\u00fc\u00adler bekom\u00adme ich dann einen Zet\u00adtel (oder ein Mail) nach fol\u00adgen\u00addem Muster:<\/p>\n

Fun\u00ade\u00adral for a Fri\u00adend 5
\nOut\u00adbound Train 2
\nPre\u00adju\u00addi\u00adce 4
\nSha\u00adring Fate 3
\nVoices 1<\/p>\n

Die\u00adse Punk\u00adte \u00fcber\u00adtra\u00adge ich in eine Excel-Tabel\u00adle, die auto\u00adma\u00adtisch die Sum\u00adme berechnet.<\/p>\n

Beque\u00admer geht die Aus\u00adwer\u00adtung mit einem Goog\u00adle For\u00admu\u00adlar<\/a>.<\/p>\n

Der Gewin\u00adner bekommt 4 MOs<\/a>, der zwei\u00adte 3 und alle wei\u00adte\u00adren 2 MOs.<\/p>\n

Mit die\u00adsen klei\u00adnen Wett\u00adbe\u00adwer\u00adben m\u00f6ch\u00adte ich u.A. nach dem Mot\u00adto \u201eLite\u00adra\u00adtur ist MACH\u00adbar, Herr Nach\u00adbar!\u201c ver\u00admit\u00adteln, dass Lite\u00adra\u00adtur nicht etwas Abge\u00adho\u00adbe\u00adnes, in h\u00f6he\u00adren Sph\u00e4\u00adren Schwe\u00adben\u00addes ist, son\u00addern mit ent\u00adspre\u00adchen\u00addem Wis\u00adsen, Arbeit und nat\u00fcr\u00adlich Talent auch von Sch\u00fc\u00adlern \u201emach\u00adbar\u201c ist. Sch\u00fc\u00adler sol\u00adlen dar\u00ad\u00fcber\u00adhin\u00adaus erken\u00adnen, dass man in vie\u00adlen F\u00e4l\u00adlen durch\u00adaus begr\u00fcn\u00adden kann, war\u00adum ein Text bes\u00adser als ein ande\u00adrer ist, wobei ande\u00adrer\u00adseits auch das schlich\u00adte, ganz sub\u00adjek\u00adti\u00adve \u201eI sim\u00adply don\u2019t like it\u201c sei\u00adne Berech\u00adti\u00adgung hat.<\/p>\n

Im Fol\u00adgen\u00adden ein Bei\u00adspiel aus mei\u00adnem LK. Als ers\u00adtes soll\u00adten die Sch\u00fc\u00adler eine durch\u00adein\u00adan\u00adder\u00adge\u00adw\u00fcr\u00adfel\u00adte Ver\u00adsi\u00adon von Micha\u00adel Bul\u00adlocks \u201eThe Head\u201c<\/a> in die rich\u00adti\u00adge Rei\u00adhen\u00adfol\u00adge brin\u00adgen. Als n\u00e4chs\u00adtes soll\u00adte ein Ende geschrie\u00adben werden.<\/p>\n

Kla\u00adrer Sie\u00adger wur\u00adde der Text von Neal Con\u00adway<\/strong>:<\/p>\n

When her lover comes to visit her that evening he finds the door locked and the house in dark\u00adness and a death\u00adly silence. He goes around the back, inten\u00adding to use his back door key, only to find it alre\u00ada\u00addy open. Going insi\u00adde, he spots her, tur\u00adned away from him, her left arm and should\u00ader con\u00adcea\u00adled beneath some kind of blan\u00adket, but naked other\u00adwi\u00adse, in the door-ope\u00adning of her dim\u00adly cand\u00adle-lit bed\u00adroom. Wan\u00adting to sur\u00adpri\u00adse her he deci\u00addes to creep up on her. His fin\u00adger\u00adtips bare\u00adly an inch from her waist, a croa\u00adking men\u00adacing voice makes him stop in his tracks. \u201eHel\u00adlo, Tom\u00admy\u201c. Her cold but firm right hand takes hold of his start\u00adled one, and leads him to the lar\u00adge dou\u00adble bed. She lies down on her back, still making sure her left arm remains unseen, and prompts him to und\u00adress with her right. It is only after having ner\u00advous\u00adly dis\u00adpatched his clo\u00adthes and clim\u00adbed into bed, kne\u00ade\u00adling abo\u00adve her, that he looks her in the eyes. Para\u00adly\u00adsed by what he sees, he fails to stop the cover\u00aded arm moving towards his gro\u00adin like a gre\u00adat dark bird des\u00adcen\u00adding on it\u2019s hel\u00adp\u00adless prey. It takes all night for him to bleed to death.<\/p>\n

Auf den zwei\u00adten Platz wur\u00adde das Ende von Ange\u00adla Feld\u00admann<\/strong> gew\u00e4hlt:<\/p>\n

The lover walks around the house and tri\u00ades to peek through the win\u00addows but he can\u2019t see any\u00adthing except the lonely living room. He beg\u00adins to worry about the woman becau\u00adse she had never missed any date with him befo\u00adre. He deci\u00addes to check if she\u2019s alright and clim\u00adbs up to the bal\u00adc\u00ado\u00adny whe\u00adre a door is slight\u00adly open. As soon as he steps insi\u00adde the bed\u00adroom a omi\u00adnous fee\u00adling crawls down his back and he shi\u00advers. He sneaks down into the living room but he still can\u2019t find anyo\u00adne. Sud\u00adden\u00adly he hears a crack\u00ading noi\u00adse from the base\u00adment. While he\u2019s wal\u00adking towards the stairs careful\u00adly his fear and a hor\u00adri\u00adble pre\u00admo\u00adni\u00adti\u00adon are gro\u00adwing insi\u00adde him. He rea\u00adches the door to the base\u00adment room and can now defi\u00adni\u00adte\u00adly hear the crack\u00ading sound again. He is breathing deep\u00adly and puts his fin\u00adgers around the door hand\u00adle. Slow\u00adly he pushes it down and opens the door a litt\u00adle bit. Red light streams out of the small crack and shi\u00adnes bright\u00adly on his face. He glan\u00adces insi\u00adde the room. The woman is stan\u00adding in the midd\u00adle of the room with a stran\u00adge look upon her face. Her wrist is blee\u00adding but she does\u00adn\u2019t seem to rea\u00adli\u00adze that. She is brea\u00adking a bunch of bran\u00adches and throws them in a fire which is bur\u00adning in a huge iron bowl on the ground. He steps towards her but befo\u00adre he can say any\u00adthing she bows down and picks up some\u00adthing round which had been hid\u00adden behind the bowl. She throws it right on to him and as soon as it tou\u00adch\u00ades his neck it starts biting some\u00adthing poin\u00adty deep\u00adly into his fle\u00adsh. He rea\u00adli\u00adzes that it is her husband\u2019s head that starts to bite his head off his body. He tri\u00ades to defend hims\u00adelf and pull the head out of his fle\u00adsh but the dark\u00adness of the unbe\u00adara\u00adble pain over\u00adw\u00adhelms him.<\/p>\n

Mit nur einem ein\u00adzi\u00adgen Punkt ganz knapp geschla\u00adgen auf dem drit\u00adten Platz lan\u00adde\u00adte der Text von Eli\u00adsa\u00adbeth Weber<\/strong>:<\/p>\n

He stands out\u00adside the house and looks through the win\u00addow, but he can\u2019t make out any\u00adthing in the dark\u00adness. Insi\u00adde, the woman is still fight\u00ading with the head, but soon the silent strugg\u00adle comes to an end as the woman beco\u00admes tired. It is only then that she noti\u00adces that all the lights went off. She is shi\u00adve\u00adring now and longs for her lover to com\u00adfort her. She calls for help, but her words don\u2019t pene\u00adtra\u00adte the black\u00adness that, thick as a blan\u00adket, pres\u00adses on her hea\u00advi\u00adly and makes ever\u00ady\u00adthing numb. Sin\u00adce the\u00adre is no mind con\u00adtrol bet\u00adween them, the lover lea\u00adves to go home or to a bar or to a friend\u2019s \u2013 we don\u2019t fol\u00adlow him \u2013 and the woman is left with the head. When she has cal\u00admed hers\u00adelf down, she rea\u00adli\u00adzes she\u2019s not shi\u00adve\u00adring any\u00admo\u00adre becau\u00adse of her husband\u2019s tee\u00adth which are still \u2013 dog\u00adged as he is \u2013 bur\u00adro\u00adwed into the woman\u2019s wrist. Along with the warmth a silent hap\u00adpi\u00adness spreads in her body, first in her left arm, then in her chest and in her head, and final\u00adly in the rest of her body. This new eupho\u00adria makes her for\u00adget all about the pain in her wrist, her lover, and even the head. She feels bet\u00adter than on her wed\u00adding day or any other day in her life and so it\u2019s no won\u00adder that she takes no noti\u00adce of her feet that slow\u00adly begin to dis\u00adap\u00adpear. After a while, she can\u2019t see or hear or smell any\u00adthing becau\u00adse her head is all gone, but what was that to worry about when she felt just so fine. Her hand isn\u2019t warm any\u00admo\u00adre, it is hot now and rather unp\u00adlea\u00adsant, but lucki\u00adly the\u00adre is enough water in the bowl for both the woman\u2019s hand and her husband\u2019s head to cool them. They are very peaceful like this, a hap\u00adpy cou\u00adple, you could call it, cozy tog\u00ade\u00adther\u00adness, t\u00eate-\u00e0-t\u00eate.<\/p>\n

An die\u00adsem Text gef\u00e4llt mir vor allem der intru\u00adsi\u00adve nar\u00adra\u00adtor <\/em>(\u201ewe don\u2019t fol\u00adlow him\u201c), der raf\u00adfi\u00adnier\u00adte Ein\u00adsatz von repor\u00adted thought <\/em>(\u201ebut what was that to worry about\u201c) und nat\u00fcr\u00adlich das herr\u00adlich maka\u00adbre \u201et\u00eate-\u00e0-t\u00eate\u201c Ende.<\/p>\n

Auf den vier\u00adten Platz kam der Text von Eve\u00adlyn Rei\u00adter<\/strong>:<\/p>\n

The lover sneaks round the house twice befo\u00adre he lifts the door\u00admat with goo\u00adse-bumps all over his neck and moist palms. He knows that she keeps an \u201cemer\u00adgen\u00adcy key\u201d, as she calls it, the\u00adre. It sounds like a saw sli\u00adding over his spi\u00adne when he sticks the key into the lock. Shht! He stops abrupt\u00adly. There\u2019s a sound! From the living room? Yeah, defi\u00adni\u00adte\u00adly! While he goes along the cor\u00adri\u00addor, his who\u00adle face gets wet and the sweat runs into his eyes. Damn, that stings! But he just wipes it off and keeps on moving for\u00adward, as if his legs were con\u00adtrol\u00adled by some wires and he was just a pup\u00adpet. The young man rea\u00adches the living room \u2013 much plea\u00adsu\u00adre this room last weeks only yes\u00adter\u00adday pushed him sofa squeezed her lips over his all along stran\u00adge round thing cof\u00adfee table pie\u00adce of black cloth over it wasn\u2019t allo\u00adwed to lift \u2026<\/p>\n

When the young man glan\u00adces into the room, he sees the woman\u2019s moti\u00adon\u00adless body on the flo\u00ador, illu\u00admi\u00adna\u00adted by the almost shy light of two cand\u00adles. It takes him some seconds to dis\u00adco\u00adver a head, lying next to her and making dis\u00adgus\u00adting, loud smacks. Sud\u00adden\u00adly he loses con\u00adtrol over his body, his eyes and his thoughts, as if his who\u00adle exis\u00adtence was absor\u00adbed by the sce\u00adne. He sta\u00adres at the head, which devours the woman\u2019s arm and then bites with pas\u00adsio\u00adna\u00adte hun\u00adger and hate into her bel\u00adly. And while it is eating, a body starts gro\u00adwing down\u00adwards from that head. But befo\u00adre the young man can wit\u00adness any more, he sinks into cold, sound\u00adless darkness.<\/p>\n

An die\u00adsem Ende kann man sch\u00f6n demons\u00adtrie\u00adren wie die stream of con\u00adscious\u00adness <\/em>Pas\u00adsa\u00adge den Leser gera\u00adde\u00adzu zwingt men\u00adtal aktiv zu wer\u00adden und zu spe\u00adku\u00adlie\u00adren, was denn da jetzt genau pas\u00adsiert ist.<\/p>\n

Schlie\u00df\u00adlich hat sich Anto\u00adnia Lang<\/strong> ein ori\u00adgi\u00adnel\u00adles, \u00fcber\u00adra\u00adschen\u00addes Ende ausgedacht:<\/p>\n

He mana\u00adges to break open the door. When he walks into the kit\u00adchen he sees an enve\u00adlo\u00adpe lying the\u00adre. He opens it. It is from the woman.<\/p>\n

\u201eMy dear,<\/p>\n

I am gone, plea\u00adse don\u2019t try to find me. I have found a way to bring back my hus\u00adband from the dead. Loo\u00adking back it was real\u00adly easy but how could I have known that he just nee\u00added my blood to be able to grow a new body? Plea\u00adse lea\u00adve us alo\u00adne. I hope you understand.\u201c<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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