{"id":10876,"date":"2015-12-30T17:15:59","date_gmt":"2015-12-30T16:15:59","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.jochenenglish.de\/?p=10876"},"modified":"2020-10-02T17:05:54","modified_gmt":"2020-10-02T15:05:54","slug":"write-about-200-to-250-words","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jochenlueders.de\/?p=10876","title":{"rendered":"Write about 200 to 250 words."},"content":{"rendered":"

\u2026 lau\u00adtet die Anwei\u00adsung im baye\u00adri\u00adschen Abitur f\u00fcr den Com\u00adpo\u00adsi\u00adti\u00adon<\/em>. Schau\u00aden wir uns mal an, wie so ein Auf\u00adsatz aus\u00adsieht. Neh\u00admen wir das ers\u00adte The\u00adma des Abitur 2015\/I: \u201eGro\u00adwing migra\u00adti\u00adon to urban are\u00adas in the 21st cen\u00adtu\u00adry: dis\u00adcuss the impli\u00adca\u00adti\u00adons for rural communities.\u201c<\/p>\n

Der fol\u00adgen\u00adde Auf\u00adsatz hat genau 250 W\u00f6r\u00adter<\/strong>:<\/p>\n

The world\u2019s popu\u00adla\u00adti\u00adon has more than dou\u00adbled in the last fif\u00adty years, most of the\u00adse peo\u00adp\u00adle live in cities or urban are\u00adas. With more and more peo\u00adp\u00adle lea\u00adving rural are\u00adas and moving clo\u00adser to big cities, life in the\u00adse are\u00adas is chan\u00adging a lot. Most of today\u2019s urba\u00adniza\u00adti\u00adon is taking place in deve\u00adlo\u00adping count\u00adries, such as India and Bra\u00adzil. Most of the mir\u00adgrants hope for a bet\u00adter life, whe\u00adre they can mana\u00adge to feed their fami\u00adlies, wit\u00adhout having to work in fields the who\u00adle day.<\/p>\n

This mas\u00adsi\u00adve migra\u00adti\u00adon comes with a lot of draw\u00adbacks. A farm is usual\u00adly a fami\u00adly busi\u00adness, all the fami\u00adly mem\u00adbers help out and the son or daugh\u00adter will get the farm when they are old enough. But due to gro\u00adwing migra\u00adti\u00adon the heirs often move to the cities lea\u00adving behind their old lives and fami\u00adly. When the owners get too old they can\u00adnot keep up with the work and have to sell their land, thus having to move some\u00adwhe\u00adre else to live.<\/p>\n

But also in Ger\u00adma\u00adny, e.g. in Meck\u00adlen\u00adburg-Vor\u00adpom\u00admern you can see the nega\u00adti\u00adve impli\u00adca\u00adti\u00adons. Life beco\u00admes con\u00adstant\u00adly har\u00adder for the remai\u00adning, espe\u00adci\u00adal\u00adly older peo\u00adp\u00adle. The\u00adre are e.g. no more doc\u00adtors, fac\u00adto\u00adries, shops and cine\u00admas clo\u00adse and public trans\u00adport dete\u00adrio\u00adra\u00adtes. The\u00adr\u00ade\u00adfo\u00adre tho\u00adse places beco\u00adme even more unat\u00adtrac\u00adti\u00adve \u2013 a vicious circle.<\/p>\n

Slow\u00adly but sure\u00adly fewer peo\u00adp\u00adle will live in rural are\u00adas of most count\u00adries and cities will grow even lar\u00adger than they are today. Poli\u00adti\u00adci\u00adans will have to think how to make rural are\u00adas attrac\u00adti\u00adve again.<\/p>\n

Ist das jetzt ein (sehr) guter oder ein schlech\u00adter Auf\u00adsatz? Mei\u00adne Ant\u00adwort: BEIDES.<\/p>\n

Es ist ein sehr guter Auf\u00adsatz, weil in der vor\u00adge\u00adge\u00adbe\u00adnen Wort\u00adzahl (wenn man sie w\u00f6rt\u00adlich nimmt) ein\u00adfach nicht mehr drin\u00adnen ist. Es gibt eine ordent\u00adli\u00adche Ein\u00adlei\u00adtung, die bei\u00adden Abs\u00e4t\u00adze des Haupt\u00adteils begin\u00adnen mit einem topic sen\u00adtence<\/em>, auf den sich alle fol\u00adgen\u00adden S\u00e4t\u00adze bezie\u00adhen. Der final para\u00adgraph<\/em> wie\u00adder\u00adholt nicht nur, son\u00addern gibt eine Art Aus\u00adblick. Leh\u00adrer\u00adherz \u2013 was willst du mehr?<\/p>\n

Gleich\u00adzei\u00adtig ist es nat\u00fcr\u00adlich ein j\u00e4m\u00admer\u00adli\u00adcher Auf\u00adsatz. Die\u00adses l\u00e4p\u00adpi\u00adsche Text\u00adlein soll die Qua\u00adli\u00adt\u00e4t<\/del>, par\u00addon, Exzel\u00adlenz des baye\u00adri\u00adschen Abiturs bewei\u00adsen. Geht\u2019s noch? Ein \u201eHaupt\u00adteil\u201c, der aus zwei Abs\u00e4t\u00adzen mit jeweils vier S\u00e4tz\u00adchen besteht? Lachhaft!<\/p>\n

Aber mit 250 W\u00f6r\u00adtern sind wir ja an der Ober\u00adgren\u00adze. Erlaubt sind schlie\u00df\u00adlich auch nur 200 W\u00f6r\u00adter<\/strong>:<\/p>\n

The world\u2019s popu\u00adla\u00adti\u00adon has more than dou\u00adbled in the last fif\u00adty years, most of the\u00adse peo\u00adp\u00adle live in cities or urban are\u00adas. With more and more peo\u00adp\u00adle lea\u00adving rural are\u00adas and moving clo\u00adser to big cities, life in the\u00adse are\u00adas is chan\u00adging a lot. Most of today\u2019s urba\u00adniza\u00adti\u00adon is taking place in deve\u00adlo\u00adping count\u00adries, such as India and Brazil.<\/p>\n

This mas\u00adsi\u00adve migra\u00adti\u00adon comes with a lot of draw\u00adbacks. A farm is usual\u00adly a fami\u00adly busi\u00adness, all the fami\u00adly mem\u00adbers help out and the son or daugh\u00adter will get the farm when they are old enough. But due to gro\u00adwing migra\u00adti\u00adon the heirs often move to the cities lea\u00adving behind their old lives and fami\u00adly. When the owners get too old they can\u00adnot keep up with the work and have to sell their land, thus having to move some\u00adwhe\u00adre else to live.<\/p>\n

But also in Ger\u00adma\u00adny, e.g. in Meck\u00adlen\u00adburg-Vor\u00adpom\u00admern you can see the nega\u00adti\u00adve impli\u00adca\u00adti\u00adons. Life beco\u00admes con\u00adstant\u00adly har\u00adder espe\u00adci\u00adal\u00adly for older peo\u00adp\u00adle. The\u00adre are e.g. no more doc\u00adtors, fac\u00adto\u00adries, shops and cine\u00admas clo\u00adse and public trans\u00adport deteriorates.<\/p>\n

Slow\u00adly but sure\u00adly fewer peo\u00adp\u00adle will live in rural are\u00adas of most count\u00adries and cities will grow even lar\u00adger than they are today.<\/p>\n

Und dann haben wir ja immer noch unser \u201eabout\u201c (und nicht \u201eat least\u201c!). Die meis\u00adten Kol\u00adle\u00adgen inter\u00adpre\u00adtie\u00adren \u201eabout\u201c im Sin\u00adne von \u201eca. 10%\u201c. Also gehen wir noch\u00admal um 20 W\u00f6r\u00adter run\u00adter auf 180 W\u00f6r\u00adter<\/strong>:<\/p>\n

The world\u2019s popu\u00adla\u00adti\u00adon has more than dou\u00adbled in the last fif\u00adty years, most of the\u00adse peo\u00adp\u00adle live in cities or urban are\u00adas. With more and more peo\u00adp\u00adle lea\u00adving rural are\u00adas, life in the\u00adse are\u00adas is chan\u00adging a lot.<\/p>\n

This mas\u00adsi\u00adve migra\u00adti\u00adon comes with a lot of draw\u00adbacks. A farm is usual\u00adly a fami\u00adly busi\u00adness, all the fami\u00adly mem\u00adbers help out and the son or daugh\u00adter will get the farm when they are old enough. But due to gro\u00adwing migra\u00adti\u00adon the heirs often move to the cities lea\u00adving behind their old lives and fami\u00adly. When the owners get too old they can\u00adnot keep up with the work any\u00admo\u00adre and have to sell their land, thus having to move some\u00adwhe\u00adre else to live.<\/p>\n

But also in Ger\u00adma\u00adny, e.g. in Meck\u00adlen\u00adburg-Vor\u00adpom\u00admern you can see the nega\u00adti\u00adve impli\u00adca\u00adti\u00adons. Life beco\u00admes con\u00adstant\u00adly har\u00adder espe\u00adci\u00adal\u00adly for older peo\u00adp\u00adle. The\u00adre are e.g. no more doc\u00adtors, fac\u00adto\u00adries, shops and cine\u00admas clo\u00adse and public trans\u00adport deteriorates.<\/p>\n

Slow\u00adly but sure\u00adly fewer peo\u00adp\u00adle will live in rural are\u00adas of most count\u00adries and cities will grow even lar\u00adger than they are today.<\/p>\n

Mit die\u00adsem \u201eText\u201c erf\u00fcllt ein Abitu\u00adri\u00adent immer noch die offi\u00adzi\u00adel\u00adlen Vor\u00adga\u00adben und m\u00fcss\u00adte f\u00fcr Inhalt 4 und Spra\u00adche 6 BE \/ Punk\u00adte bekommen.<\/p>\n

Fazit<\/strong>: Unse\u00adre baye\u00adri\u00adschen \u201eabout 200 to 250 words\u201c sind ein Witz. Ein ver\u00adn\u00fcnf\u00adti\u00adger Abitur-Auf\u00adsatz f\u00e4ngt f\u00fcr mich bei 400 W\u00f6r\u00adtern an. Ent\u00adspre\u00adchend soll\u00adte die Anwei\u00adsung lau\u00adten: \u201eWri\u00adte at least 400 words.\u201c<\/p>\n

Update<\/strong>: Seit dem Abitur 2020 wird aus uner\u00adfind\u00adli\u00adchen Gr\u00fcn\u00adden \u201eder erwar\u00adte\u00adte Umfang der Sch\u00fc\u00adler\u00adleis\u00adtung\u201c nicht mehr genannt. Der Sch\u00fc\u00adler soll ledig\u00adlich einen coher\u00adent text<\/em> schrei\u00adben. Erwar\u00adtet wird trotz\u00addem eine Sch\u00fc\u00adler\u00adleis\u00adtung \u201enicht unter 250 W\u00f6r\u00adtern\u201c. Ein sch\u00f6\u00adnes Bei\u00adspiel f\u00fcr die aller\u00ador\u00adten gefor\u00adder\u00adte Trans\u00adpa\u00adrenz: Man hat genaue Vor\u00adstel\u00adlun\u00adgen, was der Sch\u00fc\u00adler pro\u00addu\u00adzie\u00adren soll, sagt es ihm aber nicht. Ein simp\u00adles \u201eWri\u00adte at least 250 words\u201c ist offen\u00adbar zu einfach.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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